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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1787
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;可适当增加几条从句。

用户练习作文:

It’s not uncommon today that internet has influence our life more deeply . When we enjoy the convenient of life, a lot of problems are followed. Clearly, these issues cannot be ignored. Even though it’s likely the information has the advantages of being convenient, speedy and economical, it’s waste of time to browsing websites and choosing which information they need. And it’s easy to watch electronic screen for more than three hours. For example, ever you go look up something on Baidu, something totally innocuous like Taylor Swift, you may click on Elizabeth Taylor, then on old fashion films, and you search “the best films in 2017”, over and over again until you’re deep in the middle of the hole that you’re going to forget what you want to do as soon as the laptop clicks shut. Further, the network crime is increasingly popular rather than other crimes. An example that a Chinese student who was 12 years old, became the youngest hacker. He invaded schools online system to searching exam answers because he didn’t want to do his homework. And he also spent 1 cent on the online shopping goods which are value of 2,500 Yuan. These are crimes whether or not you were agreed. Aside from money, It’s about a story about a woman called Justine Sacco. She was a PR woman from New York with 170 Twitter followers. She wrote a twitter, pressed send. 11 hours later, a journalist retweeted it to his 15,000 followers. And then it was like a bolt of lighting. She was just crushed after two weeks result from her joke on tweeter might be racist, Then thousands of people around the world decided it was their duty to get her fired. But there is not person to be punishment when Justine got shamed. These days, the hunt is on for people’s shameful secrets. You can lead a good ethical life, but some bad phraseology in a tweet can overwhelm it all. This isn’t social justice. It’s cathartic alternative. Therefore, the network is like a double-edged sword, which could make our life better or worse.

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