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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9791
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,people's life is getting better,many gift has been bought for each other.So the merchants look for way to improve the price.Lead to many good has a single problem that is on excessive packaging. Some people bought the goods found it's different from their mind. Some people bought the goods just for give it away,so they just need the gift have a nice skin,ignore the internal.Many merchants recognized is problem,which made them to manufacturing the better packaging.I think it's a bad news for us. Because people buy goods not only for giving,but also for our own.For most of the people,we more care the inside or not the packaging.So i suggest people , when you bought a goods which has a problem that is excessive packaging, you should call the industrial and commercial bureau to report it.

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