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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句的使用量，注意个别的句子错误；文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬，同时能较准确地使用高级词汇。
The picture is shows a normal phneonmenon in this society that the internet has changed the way between the young communicate with their parenes,and this way replaces face to face,in my opinion,althought the internet is a more easier ways than face to face,but this way can't support feeling. Firstly,their communication just according to the computer replaces human,secondly,some teenager don't want their parents worry about their circumstance,so they usually told a kind lied to their parents,because their parents don't seen him face to face. in sum,i think teenager as a children should spend more time with their parents.
