托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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There is a widespread phenomenon that a growing number of people would like to find a more satisfying job even waiting for a long time. In some cases, a more satisfying job can make you work harder, enjoy the life you live and receive high salary. However, as for as I’m concerned, I hold the negative view about this statement. First and foremost, taking secure job can receive a stable income. Through a secure job, we can be brought a payment, which can provide the life we live. Even though it wasn’t the most satisfied but it helps us become a financially independent person after graduate and we do not rely on parents to get all what we wanted and relieve the burden of parents in some cases. The second reason is that we have no experiences about which job is more satisfied for us, so it’s necessary to participate in a secure job first to obtain some skills and much knowledge after these can we know what is comfortable. For instance, not all of singers were a singer at first. Most of them were choose other jobs and it’s during these processes that they accumulated the experiences and found out what the favorite so that to worked hard to achieve the dreams. What’s more, lastly, finding the job is a hard work let along to join a satisfied job. There is no double that it will take a large amount of money and spend a long time to do this. At recent years, according to a research undertaken by a famous university in the U.S.A, a growing number of students who graduated from college were stay at home and did nothing. Most of them were waiting for a good job and wanted to get a high salary but didn’t though the reality in a positive way which contribute them to a embarrassed phenomenon. From what has been discussed above, we can get many benefits from the secure job. Not only can get the stable money but also the experiences and abilities. So I totally aggress with it.