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My foreign friend will invite me.I am so haappy.I can introduce him my hometown.Let him know our culture and coustom.In the letter ,he always ask everthing around me .He very interest my hometown. It is my honour to introduce my hometown.Because my hometown is not only beautiful,but also full of history.