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As we all know,technology has been developing all along with the progress of the times.We can see that everybody have their own mobliephone.People have more ways to access the informations. But,technology is a double-edged sword.At present,a saying 'A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention' triggers fierce debate.There is a very common phenomenon,many people pay more attention to their mobliephone than everthing.Some people even lose lief because that.
