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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中较熟练地使用高级词汇，但词汇量仍需积累；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
As we all know,technology has been developing all along with the progress of the times.We can see that everybody has their own mobilephone.People have more ways to access the information. But,technology is a double-edged sword.At present,a saying 'A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention' triggers fierce debate.There is a very common phenomenon,many people pay more attention to their mobilephone than everthing.Some people even lose lief because of that.
