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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5749
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇量仍需积累;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,technology has been developing all along with the progress of the times.We can see that everybody has their own mobilephone.People have more ways to access the information. But,technology is a double-edged sword.At present,a saying 'A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention' triggers fierce debate.There is a very common phenomenon,many people pay more attention to their mobilephone than everthing.Some people even lose lief because of that.

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