衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;从句比重偏低,有几处句子错误;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
when you watch something or hear something, don't give a result instantly, because it is foolish.this is open world, we need know a lot information in different way so that it is complete clean.only way make all of us giving a cleaver conclusion. For few month ago, many people think fees of Ching's hose up, but realises indecate is fault.these people con't think on own brain instead of hear opinion of other.this result awful end.
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