2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句式变化较为丰富；作者能较丰富地使用高级词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

computer，a great innovation at the last centry,its has influention our life deeply. Everything have two sides,computer also is.in one hand,computer improves the effect of the works and relax the labbor of human. on he other hand,it also damiging our life,at the working time,most of people stand the chair and face to the computer all the day,no relax,no sports.its harm for people human. in a words,the benefits more the harmful. we should use the copmputer careful.