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文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者在高级词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写。
Should college student hire cleaners ? Different people have different opiniions ,from my point of view ,college student are not supposed to hire cleaners to do lanundry or sweep. Folloming are my reasons : first ,as college student ,we are able to the housework by ourselves because we are adult and we are no longer children .Second ,most studentmay have no much spare money to hire clearners and we college student have to rely on our parents ,we gain money from them . In other word ,many student might not afford to hire clearners . Third ,why not we try to sweeping by ourselves ,in my opinions ,there are a lot of advantages of doing claeaning .It not only can train our pratice abilty but also it is a good exercise sport that we can do at home freely . In shotr , we should try to compelet some housework by ourselves not to hire cleaners to do for us .
