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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5302
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者用词生动多样,请继续努力,希望能更灵活地使用高级词汇。

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Should college student hire cleaners? Different people have different opinions ,from my point of view ,college students are not supposed to hire cleaners to do laundry or sweep. Following are my reasons: first,as college student,we are able to the housework by ourselves because we are adult and we are no longer children .Second,most student may have no much spare money to hire clearners and we college student have to rely on our parents,we gain money from them.In other words,many students might not afford to hire cleaners. Third,why not we try sweeping by ourselves,in my opinions ,there are a lot of advantages of doing cleaning.It not only can train our practice ability but also it is a good exercise that we can do at home freely. In short, we should try to complete some housework by ourselves not to employ cleaners to do for us.

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