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Should college student hire cleaners? Different people have different opinions ,from my point of view ,college students are not supposed to hire cleaners to do laundry or sweep. Following are my reasons: first,as college student,we are able to the housework by ourselves because we are adult and we are no longer children .Second,most student may have no much spare money to hire clearners and we college student have to rely on our parents,we gain money from them.In other words,many students might not afford to hire cleaners. Third,why not we try sweeping by ourselves,in my opinions ,there are a lot of advantages of doing cleaning.It not only can train our practice ability but also it is a good exercise that we can do at home freely. In short, we should try to complete some housework by ourselves not to employ cleaners to do for us.
