2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China, i think KunMing is the most of beautiful cities. There has blue sky , colourful flowers, delicious food,lovely animals and friendly people. KunMing only have one season , it's spring, It looks like spring everyday ,we can fly kites in the grass ,i think it is really good.