文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend, her name is Helen. We were colleague in 2007. we met each other have been ten years. She is a clever and fashion lady, she has long black hair, two black eyes. She is good at cooking. She likes study and reading books. She always encourages me in my life.