2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

the way to success everyone are eager to have achievement and for it to find out many ways to success.but as we all know , success is not easy . it need many parts to build up that. as for me , what is the best way to success? if you ask for me , i will say three matters about it , and it will have a great marks with this three works finished. first , you should have a clear goal . you must think clearly that what you want to do and whom you want to be . what the life conditions do you want to have?and for all about these , what is your goal ? the first issue is that you can know what you want to do. second , with a clear goal , you should know how to achieve .to arrive this goal , how many methods can you choose?and which ways would you will adapt to ?you need a great schedual for it .or it can say that you need a suitable plan. third , this step is also an important progress .you must to try and make your suitable plan. it not mean to do it one day or two days .it is a long time work .in this time , you may across many matters , and you would upset, even have the ideas that you want to give up .in this time , you should keep up and cheer up . and then , after a hard time , you would found that you have a good result ,or you have growing up . yes , i think the way to success is these three steps . one is to have a clear goal , another is to have a suitable plan for you goal .and the last, you should keep up to try an d to make . what about you ？what 's way to success is best for you ?