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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中有几处拼写错误，应增加高级词汇的使用。
Today we're talking about a topic which is how students should be careful for their money?my opion is that we should make good use of money in a correct way,don't be too save money or waste money . if you went to shop,you can't pick out many things which is no useful in your situation now ,you only choose what you need now ,and you can use all kinds of coupons,otherwise they will become rubbish ,if we eat out or travel,you can choose some small restaurants but they have their specialist,when you decide to travel ,you can follow a group of visiting by interenet or telephone,it can help you save money and protect you from dangerous. saving money is a good thing,but we don't think it dosen't need money,wo should choose a right way to do it,saving money is a good thing ,but if you choose a wrong way,you will make it worse.
