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题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分
作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Now more and more people prefer to use telephone rather than letter writing,i think one coin has two sides,so i think it's impossible that phones will kill letter writing. Many years ago,people wants to communicate with somebody .they only choose letter writing,it will take serval days to convey it to others,but now phones can bring your words and news to others right away, and it's not only one knows. past few years ago, if someone died,when you received the letter,everything was finished.but if you used telephone ,you can went back immediately .But with the development of technology .people gradually forget something,some children can't realize the chinese cultures,and they can't understand the word's meaning. So i think we should follow the sociaty steps but we shouldn't froget the old tool which brings the happiness for us.