2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；文章层次较为清晰。

With the development of adevertisement,more and more people will follow the steps of it.one coin has two sides,now,advertisement will influent others. The benefits of the advertisement have many .for example advertisement will introduce the goods'using and it can bring new some things for us.and it can improve our life's quality.but on the other hand,the adevertisements'bad influence also follow.for example ,first one,advertisements'words can change the childrens'world.some wonderful poems will be changed by some advertisements .as time goes by,there are some words appearing the internet.and it makes someone remember the words,it caused that some children can't write some meaningful articles,next one,some advertisements look very well,buy actually the goods'really face is not good ,it has bad qualities for customers.when someone buys this good,they will regret. so we should have a pair of bright eyes to pick out some good advertisements to believe,we shouldn't be cheated by advertisements.