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可适当增加几条从句；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。
A coin has two sides.in this passage ,we'll talk about the ingluence about internet with education.in my opinion ,if someone thinks it has no influence,i disagree,i think it exists a big influence. The bad influence is that Childrens'education is very important.with the development of technology,every family nearly has a computer,so internet is very closed to children,children will spend more time to play computer games than doing their homework,because they think it is very interesting than education.Addicted to the internet very deep. The good influence is that internet will bring some convienence for children.we can find some useful things from internet,and we can know the world deeply from it.and we can use it to chat with some others around the world.it will make us who can stay at home also study. so i think if you choose a kind of correct way to use it,it will be benfical for you
