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文中的句子基本没有错误，可适当将文中短句合并为长句；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。
last weekend,i am so lucky to have a chance to talk with professor kelly lam,who works in physical area .we talk about the theme of sharing feeling with other people among chinese students. And then i realized rather than 30 percents of students are not willing to share their feelings to other people ,regardless happiness or sadness.besides,we rarely talk about the importance of sharing in our traditional education. for those problems ,kelly gave his opnions to let us focus on sharing . as he said,in this time ,learning to share feelings is needed,and is will help us to grow better.
