高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

My hometown My home is lie in a town in nan chang of China. There is many factory 、 store and building.Big and small car run on the street. Industry development effect that context become more and more bad .trees reduce ,fishes disappear ,so control environmental pullution is urgent.before,it was surroud green trees ,small river was clear,fishes played. House was simple and crude.People worked and live poor . Compare past and now .we know that develop economic,at the same time ,protect contest.deveopment at the expense of context pollution is not wrong.Realise this,we will change the thing.So, we belive own good life and good environmental in the future ,then our life will be better.