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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7190
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题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Although the economy and society of many countries are developing rapidly, the life quality are decreasing in these countries. There are several reasons for this condition. First of all, our environment get worse due to industrial and living pollution. Many factories extrude poisonous water and gas. The garbage through out everyday by citizens make pollution more serious. With the pollution getting more and more serious, we have to inhale air with high PM 2.5 value. We cannot see beautiful sunrise and blue sky. And we probably have to smell disgusting smell from the garbage. Secondly, people get serious health problem for various reasons. They have to suffer from the pain and sickness everyday, which will influence their mood and restrict their will to do exercises. Last but not least, people today suffer a lot from the work and life pressure. They have to worry whether their work would be appreciated by their employer. With the price of apartment going high, they have to pay much money for their apartment, making their money less available for other important things. With the development of our society, these problems can be solved gradually. To begin with,We should develop environment protecting technologies to reduce the amount of wasted water and gas from factories. More trees should be planted to ensure the air to be fresh. The garbage should be classified and recycled as much as possible. Secondly, the awareness of health must be promoted amount people. Facilities should be installed to facilitate people to do exercises. Lastly, we have to learn to reduce our pressure by travelling or something else. In conclusion, the quality of our life is decreasing for multiple reasons. However, we can learn to solve these problems step by step so as to make our life better. These problems should be solved by the concerted effort of the government and the people.

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