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It is very important to improve our behavers.Or we would be looked down upon. I often see people spitting or talking loudly in theather.Both of them are rude and ugly.They not only troubled others but also showed they are rule. In my opinion ,they should think twice before doing.Everyone can change himself if he do want to.I also believe that there will be more and more people becaming genty。