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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17436
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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文章层次较为清晰;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

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Nowadays,computer palys a more and more important role in our life,obviously,with someone ,it had become one part of .People use computer and can't leave it on life.There are many reasons with that.From where people stand,computer help them solve some difficult problems and let them spend time.Of course,computer also help people open eyesight. However,there are many problems need to be solved.people use computer and not limit so someone indicated into computer and waste so much time.Worse,people's body become lese and lese strong,and people should go to see a doctor.And most important is that people reduce them brain to think questions,because they always depend on computer to solve problems. From where I stand,I think we should use computer to help we solve problems,but we can't depend on it.Yet,computer plays important role in our life,however we can't let computer take place of our brain,we should remember that we are computer's master.

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