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It is very important to better our behavors. Or we would be looked down upon. I often see people spitting or talking loudly in theather. Both of them are rude and ugly. They not only troubled others but also showed they are rude. In my opinion ,they should think twice before doing.Everyone can change himself for a better person proved that he does want to. I also believe that there will be more and more people becoming genty.