高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用。

It is extremely important to better our behaviour，or we would be looked down upon. I often see people spitting or talking loudly in theater，which are rude and ugly. They not only troubled others but also showed they are rude. In my opinion ，they should think twice before doing.Everyone can change himself for a better person proved that he does want to. I also believe that there will be more and more people becoming genty.