高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好。

It is extremely important to better our behaviour，or we would be looked down upon. I often see people spitting or talking loudly in theater，which are rude and ugly. They not only troubled others but also showed they are rude. In my opinion ，they should think twice before doing so that they could make less mindless mistakes. They not only troubled others but also showed they are rude. Everyone can change himself into a better person proving that he does want to. I also believe that there will be more and more citizens becoming genty.