高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；可适当增加从句的使用。

It is extremely important to better our behaviour，if not we would be looked down upon. Seeing people spitting or talking loudly in theater ，we always become angry and can't have a good mood.Bad manners not only troubled others but also showed they are rude. In my opinion，they should think twice before doing lest they could make mindless mistakes. They not only troubled others but also showed they were rude. Everyone can switch himself into a better person proving that he does want to. I also believe that there will be a creasing quanties of citizens becoming genty.