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河南郸城光明中学2012-2013学年八年级上学期期中试卷作文试题

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:51浏览次数:1101
要求:
以“我最喜爱的科目为题”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求80个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I like English best,because, It can bring me enjoyment and success. Let me tell you about my stroy. First,When I was six years old,I remember sitting close to the radio, listening to my favourite English stories and to the voice of my favourite presenters ,it seemed that they were speaking to me in person.After that,I have found I like English . second,when I was ten years ,I have a dream ,It's America dream ,because,I hope to see the whole of American.As I grow old,my interested in English grow . While I am speaking English, I will feel happy and exciting.In my opinion,It's important for me to speak English.As soon as I speak English,I will feel the world is myself. In spite of there many difficulties,I still have a dream,It's my English dream.so you know,what's my favourite dream?

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