文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
It is extremely important to better our behaviour,if not we would be looked down upon. Seeing people spitting or talking loudly in theater ,we always become angry and can't have a good mood.Bad manners not only troubled others but also showed they are rude. In my opinion,they should think twice before doing lest making mindless mistakes,which only troubled others but also showed they were rude. Everyone can switch himself into a better person proving that he does want to. I also believe that there will be a creasing number of citizens becoming genty.