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We can often comes across explanations or remarks on meaning of life,which confuses psychologist a lot.Comparing to waste time to think without an answer gotten,we had better to do something meaningful to benefit ourselves and outlast our lives. Primarily,just look back your time,if you did, spent on programmers broadcast on television or internet just for fun,and you will find that you get nothing finally expect for short fun and wasting time,which results in when you leave,no one will remember you.In contrast,why do we admire and learn from people like Leifeng?Nobody can deny that they contributed their time and energy to help others,deserving admiration,so that they are our heroes. On my opinion,Only when you do something meaningful,your life will be colorful.