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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22883
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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My hometown My hometown is a beautiful and small town in northern china, it was changed as time past. At past time, there were many trees around the town, and some kinds of wild flowers wer everwhere,you could smell gragrant when the spring was coming. A small river flew in the front of town, there were a few of fishes that swimming in the river.The houses in the town were small and rough, the streets in the town were not only narrow but also little. the most people worked hard but made a little money.Nowadays, a lot of buildings and big shops have been set up. Many vehicles ran on the street.As industry developed,enviroment became wore and wore, the trees have been cut and fish has disappearded from river. We have to take a action for pollution.

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