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雅思TASK2大作文模拟题:学校 schools

发布时间:2013-07-17 16:29浏览次数:912
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Some people think that single sex schools are better for students than co-ed schools. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
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Nowadays, many parents choose to send their children to single sex schools while others prefer the co-ed schools. In my opinion, co-ed schools will be better to children in terms of their growing. Those who support the single sex schools believe that the school with only one sex will provide their children a more pure environment, preventing them from falling in love at an early age. They want to try everything they can to seperate the children from all the elements they believe are bad for the development of their children. Others who stand on the side of single sex schools might believe that it is much easier to manage a school with only sex students, after all, boys and girls are raised differently. While those who choose the co-ed schools hold such a view that being educated at a school with both girls and boys are better for their psychologically. Children learn how to cooperate with both same sex and different sex, which is what the real world looks like. More important, they can make some friends with the other sex, which will definitely benefit their metal development. They will take it naturally when they enter the college and contact the other sex students instead of feeling nervous and uncomfortable. To draw the conclusion, I think the sex education is also an intergral part of education to children. Children should be able to learn to know the different sexes existed in the world, to make friends with different sexes, for each sex has her/his advantages and disadvantages. Girls can learn being strong and persevarance from boys, and boys can learn being gentle and emotional from girls. Only in this way, can they make the whole colorful world all together.

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