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how to improve school safety As a student,we should know the improtance of safety,if we don't know how to protest ourselves from innonce,we will the fact that we can't go into the society,we can't live a comfort life. First of all ,we should take kinds of treasurements to protect ourselves ,such as stay away from the dangerous,we could learn how to get good frendships with our companion,we also can go home and go to school on time as soon as possible .No matter who we are we can't always in safe situation,at the same time ,we need the security guard helps.When we see the innonce events on campus,we can ask help for thesecurity guard.Finally,the realization of safe is a key to our children,school should teacher students how to protect themselves。 With the growth of children,we will know the environment where our children lives.Remember that the more old ,the more dangerous
