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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it. First of all, I would like to have a short trip to Xian with my best friend Amy,because both of us are curious about Xian's history. And then, I will go to a small town,where my grandparents live and I can also enjoy a beautiful senery there. Finally, I will watch my favorite movie at home, through which I can grasp a good knowledge of English. What's your plan for summer vacation, please reply me as soon as possible. Yours, David
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