作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the prevalence of the internet, the frequence of interpernal communication is decreasing.Many people are in alarm that the individuals will be not accustomed to communicating with each other face-to-face due to internet.Moreover,many adults often chat with each other via the net,so that they lose the ability to communicate in reality.Worse comes to the worst,facing strangers,many adults fail to exactly express their feelings. As a saying is going,every coin has its two sides.Of course,this phenomenon is no exception.We can make friends with people from all over the world through chatting online.And most important, no matter where we are and whenever it is,we are able to communicate with each other,which increases more chances to speak out their own ideas. From what is mentioned above,we can draw a conclusion that facing the internet,we should encourage the merits and discourage the demerits to the extent.Only in this way can we perfect our interpersonal communication via the net.
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