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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11303
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。

用户练习作文:

With the high speed of electronic technology that the power of modern technology around us everywhere. The mobile phone is common in the majority of communication devices. It is very convenient to us to use phone to order products, book hotel, call take-out, various door-to-door service. It is undeniable that smart phone makes our life easer and convenient, but we must know that"Overdone is worse than undone". Things are always have two aspects, the opposite of convenience is dangerous, indifferent and disease. Across nowadays society, you'll see people always handle the cell phone no matter where they are, even in the street. When they pass through the sidewalk, it is pathetically that they even more concentrate on their phone instead of vehicles, it's too dangerous. What is more, they spend time online when they drive a car, it's an irresponsible behavior. Meanwhile, overusing cell phone also estranges the distance between people, imagine a picture, many people stay together for playing cell phone, they don't talk to each other, even there are a conversation as well as by phone, what is a clownish scene. I hold the view of that phone is just a communication device, we can use it for entertainment occasional, besides this, we need pay more attention to our lives and friends, families.

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