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The benefits of volunteering Leifeng said"I will dedicate my limited life to the limitless job of serving the people". Anyway, we should show respect for him and learn from his spirit. Because he is a volunteer who serves other people as his duty. Somone thinks the volunteer job is meaningless, and it will waste their time.If you also think so, it maybe a big mistake. Now, I will tell you the advantages of volunteering job. First, to participate in volunteer activities can enhance your sense of responsibility. Then, this will expand your circle of interpersonal, give you the opportunity to communicate with strangers. In a word, volunteer will bring you unexpected harvest.
