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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2451
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。

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The benefits of volunteering Leifeng said"I will dedicate my limited life to the limitless job of serving the people". Anyway, we should show respect for him and learn from his spirit. Because he is a volunteer who serves other people as his duty. Someone thinks the volunteer job is meaningless, and it will waste their time.If you think so, it would be a big mistake. Now, I will tell you the advantages of volunteering job. First, to participate in volunteer activities can enhance your sense of responsibility. Then, this will expand your circle of friends, give you the opportunity to communicate with strangers. In a word, volunteer will bring you unexpected harvest.

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