2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句数量偏少；作者词汇基础不错，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中衔接词丰富。

There are many places of interest in China, attracting visitors who come from all over the world. The Great Wall is one of the hostoric sites in China. A chinese saying like that"you are not a real hero until you have clmibed The Great Wall"The Great Wall, is the word's longest man-made-structure, stretching over a formid able 6.25km.It winds up and down across deserts 、glassland、mantains and so on. The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. Along the wall are watchtow-ers, where soldiers used to keep watch. Fires were lit on the the towers as a warning when the enemy came. Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese but to people from all over the world. Let's go to The Great wall to beacome a real hero.