2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累较少。

There are many places of interest in China, attracting visitors who come from all over the world. The Great Wall is one of the historic sites in China for the reason that it is very grand. A Chinese saying like that"you are not a real hero until you have climbed The Great Wall"The Great Wall, is the word's longest man-made-structure, stretching over a formid able 6.25km.It winds up and down across deserts 、grassland、mountains and so on. The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. Along the wall are watchtow-ers, where soldiers used to keep watch. Fires were lit on the towers as a warning when the enemy came. Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese but to people from all over the world. If you walk on The Great Wall, you will think you are stronger than other people who never go to the Great Wall. Let's go to The Great wall to become a real hero.