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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71661
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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There are many places of interest in China, attracting visitors who come from all over the world. The Great Wall is one of the historic sites in China for the reason that it is more than grand. A Chinese saying like that"you are not a real hero until you have climbed The Great Wall"The Great Wall, is the word's longest man-made-structure, stretching over a formid able 6.25km.It winds up and down across deserts、grassland、mountains and so on. The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. Along the wall are watchtow-ers, where soldiers used to keep watch. Fires were lit on the towers as a warning when the enemy came. Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese but to people from all over the world. If you walk on The Great Wall, you will think you are stronger than other individuals who never go to the Great Wall. Let's go to The Great wall to become a real hero.

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