雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇使用熟练灵活，但要注意避免拼写错误；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

Traveling abroad, once a previlege to wealthy, has gaining increasing popularity for taveling to other countries has been more convenient and easier. Many people regard it as a postive effect, while other take it as negative effect. And I agree with the former view. Traveling to other countries helps people to enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizon. People can learn different cultures from different countries, including the local life, habits and customs, by which, people will learn to embrace different ideas and come to terms with differences in life and work. In addition, people should much pressure nowadays, traveling is the best way to relieve them from the stress and spice up their life, which will recharge themselves both physically and psychologically. People who believe that it is a negative effect may think that traveling to other countries too much lead to environmental problems and exhaustion of valuable energy resources. For example, airplane will produce huge amount of carbon dioxide and cause noise pollution, which is always a headache to every country in the issue of environmental protection. Besides, planes cost a lot fuel, which enhances the energy problem facing human beings nowadays. In my opinion, traveling to other countries more and more easily is a postive development, which should be encouraged. Considering some side-effects produced by traveling by air, we should try to invent some clearn energy or fuel-effective plane to solve them instead of making some restrictions on airplanes.