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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;可适当增加从句的使用;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

We are often told that second thoughts are best.There is no doubt that we need to realize that snap judgments can never be trusted. There are several reasons why we should not make snap judgments . First,if we determine to do something,we need to take the advantages and disadvantages in to considerration.For example ,we have to spend much time on collecting revelant knowledges ,discussing the outcome and making a plan.Otherwise,we will be exposed to plenty of difficulties that we did not expected.Snap judgments are harmful to exercise and will cause unneeded problems. Second,snap judgments may let us lost many opportunities which are very important to us.For a graduated student,getting a job is the most important thing.when a student try to find a jod,he need to evaluate his access and be clear what is more suitable to him. Finally,as a proverb says,look before you leap.For these reasons ,i srongly recommend that we should avoid making snap judgments.

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