2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文章能够较丰富地使用高级词汇，可是文章用词太过单一；文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词。

My hometown is located at a isolated but beautiful village. If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown, I will take him to see garden in our village. I think the garden is a vision in my hometown. There are beautiful flowers in spring, growing vegetable in summer, laborious farmers in fall and heavily snowing in winter. The garden is so beautiful and no wonder I want to take him to admire it.