2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用。

My hometown is located at an isolated but beautiful village. If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown, I will take him to see garden in our village. As far as I concerned, the garden is a vision in my hometown. Firstly,there are beautiful flowers in spring, growing vegetable in summer, laborious farmers in fall and heavily snowing in winter. Secondly, after visiting our garden, I think my foreign friend will know about our eating habits and lifestyle though what he see at the garden. The garden is so great and no wonder I want to take him to admire it.