小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；结构良好，但是语言不流畅。

liHua is my best friend ,he has a short and black hair ,he has a good memory about everything. as my best friend he always makes happy and give me a lot of care ,I like his humorous and quality to solve difficult problems. in my perspective , he is very clever and smart , I enjoy to staying with him.