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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9021
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

How to lead a meaningful life? The answer varies from person to person. For those who believe that life is short and they have to make a difference in the world,achieving the significance of life seems to be more essential. From my standpoint,at first, pursuing what you like lies at heart of the meaning your life. When I do things interest me, I feel full of energy and grip the key of happiness. Secondly,leading a meaningful life require that you challenge yourself constantly and overcome obstacles in the way. Enconutering dilemmas from time to time in life is too normal to mention. Only when you shake off fear and address them bravely can you obtain a fruitful future. Incidently,having friends and relatives company with you is also fantastic. In conclusion,how to a meaningful life lies on your own efforts.

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