2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

recently ,the topic between human and computer has aroused a great concern.One thing the blessing of intelligent mechanization is more than its unhealthy effects on me . while others oppose it . As i see ,i should give my vote to the first . Here are some reasons to support my view . Firstly , it s obvious that computer has brought us the boom of information century ,only by it can we connect with our family ,our ethric,our friends in some seconds . secondly, i think PC area is a kind of world that involved vast great things we never contacted fore ,indeed ,no improvement and advance of computer,no changes of our life . in the foregoing sense ,we must thank for PC.