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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接不是很自然；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。
As far as I am concerned that as a student I am, I don't have too much money and most of us, our money from our parents . So we should save money and make maximum use of money. First ,as for me ,since I entred university my father told me that I could relax my money .In the spare time ,I will do some part-time job . I know that the study is the important for me, however, the college student should own more abilities . The same time ,I will have money to do other things. Second, we collect all kinds of coupons and look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel ,which not only help us save money but also we can make more friends . However ,I don't agree that we don't buy clothes unless in a sale . My experience told me many beautiful thing you can't wait . I still rembered that I go street with my mother ,usually we around many shop , but I will choose the first clother which I like . Sometime , my mother want to around all the shops before I bought .Because that I missed my love . At last but not least , our atitude of spending money behalf our life-style . In our daliy life ,we have lot of restraints so that we should control ourself . I think these restraints just like our money , the money is limited .
