结构良好,但是语言不流畅;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达,高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样。
As is depicted in the picture,the gross production of tobacco in the world are 14.364 billion pounds in 1994 and 14.2 billion in 1995. There are 5.8 billion people in the world,which tobacco consumers of which the number is 1.1 billion are 20 percent of them. Economic losses on It are 200 billion dollars and 3 million people lose their lives. In my oppinions , the consumption of tobacco will decline.As the society improving ,people recognize the destruction of tobacco to human and find many new things to entertain. The goverments are enthusiastic to increase the tax of tobacco. Beyond these,people cherish their lifes day in day out, and have more healthy habits.